Fanfiction of Harry Potter

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The story that I read is about Harry Potter, I do not know what chapter was, because in the story Ron was mentioned already dead. Then Hermione had delusional about Ron that actually Ron was still alive. The story does not have opening, climax, and ending. T was very flat story, I think.

Comment:
I do not really like the story. I think almost the story in fanfiction are too imaginative. Yet, some of the readers give high rating to the story. Perhaps I have to be more imaginative then. I learn some vocabulary from the story, but I can catch the story well because the diction in the story is flat.

Adna