Cinderella by Carlisle’s girl (happily ever after)

Title : Cinderella by Carlisle’s girl (happily ever after)

Summary :

Ella sat by the fire place and gazed into the fire, her favorite book clutched in her hands, a gift from her father who is dead now. Now, she lived with her step mother and two step sisters. One day, there was an invitation letter from the Kingdom; the prince was looking for his princess. Ella wanted to go there, but her step mother and her step sisters left her in the house. When she was crying, the fairy used her magic to change Cinderella's dress and got her to the castle. There, she met a handsome prince who fell in love with her at the first sight. She realized that she was bad, so she said good bye to the prince. Then, she went back to her house with her step mother who knew that there was Cinderella. Her step sisters laughed and insulted her because she was stupid to leave the prince. Five years later Ella stood with her sisters as they got married with two men from the town. She smiled truly happy that they had found their perfect men. They were set to have chubby cheeked children, but still no happily ever after for Ella. Ella isn’t a servant anymore but she still lives with her step mother who is an old woman. Ella has decided she doesn’t need a happily ever after because that is not an ending. It is just a pause.

Gundah B

Return to Paradise

Title : Return to Paradise

I read the story about a woman who has some dreams in Caribbean Sea. Unfortunately, the woman’s dreams didn’t come true at all. She just sensed her bliss with her husband only a few years. Heartache can change her life and her dreams. She lost her husband. Now, she is lonely and she wants to find her new life and new dreams. She hoped that she will find her bliss in the Caribbean Sea in the second time.

Comments
I like the plot of this story. The woman can survive her life from her problems. She didn’t spend her life in despair. She tries to be better than before.

Tri Agusti

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

Title : The Boy Who Cried Wolf

Comments :
About the story :
The story is nice to read. It’s fun and far from boring. It explains the event in details, but doesn’t exaggerate the fact. It gives the readers somewhat a right portion of text. Since it’s made for children, the vocabularies used are quite common. However, the structure of the sentences and the style of the direct speeches are not very common . The story tells us not to lie. No one believes a liar, even when he says the truth.

Rahmati Putri

The River of Venom

Website : kidsclick.org
Title : The River of Venom

Summary :

This is a science mystery. It used second point of view (you). The story begins when “you” arrive at a killer bee research center in Amazon river. “You” meet Jorge and he leads “you” to the lab. There “you” and Jorge find Dr. Hernandez unconscious and the killer bees are released. (that’s all I have read)

Comment

This story is interesting. Actually, when I start reading this story, I want to know what comes next. There are some knowledge about bees. The language is easy, although this story is related with science. It makes understanding science is easier.

Mochammad Luqman

Rain Forest

I read an article about Rain forest.

Comments

• I like the article because of several reasons. First, because I like to climbing mountains. I chose this topic. Second, this article gave me a lot of information about rain forest. Last, all forest in Indonessia are rain forest so I have to know about rain forest better than anyone in this world.
• I have learnt so many things from this article, not only from the language I could learnt expressions which were I never found before such as “the most complex interdependence of plants and animals”, ”temperature latitudes”, “tropical rain forest” and “temperature rain forest”. Second, I also learn about the rain forest. For instance, there are two types of rain forest, tropical rain forest. The location of tropical rain forest are in Brazil and South East Asia including Indonesia while the location of temperate rain forest are in Chile, North America and the South part of Australia.

Wisnu A

River of Venom

Title : River of Venom
Genre : Science mystery

Summary :

The story is using second person point of view. The main character,”you” is a new member of an organization to research about bee. It is in the Amazon Jungle. When he enters the main tent where the head of that organization stays, he finds out that Dr. Hernandez, the head, is attacked by swarms of killer bees. At first, it looks like just an accident, a moment of reckless, which caused the bees to release attack. However, apparently that is not the case. “You” and another member named Jorge think that the bee attack is not an accident. So, they decide to seek out the truth.

Comment:

This story is quite interesting. It has an interesting plot line and easy language use. I can understand it easily. Reading this story, I can get more knowledge about bees.

Suci Dirgantary

The River of Venom

The River of Venom, a science fiction mystery that is used second person point of view. The story asks the readers to imagine about the story. It was in the jungle. The main character came to research place; but there was a bad thing happened. The doctor on the research lab found unconscious because of stung by bees. Actually, the doctor got another sickness from something mysterious. The reader have to choose some choices to know the ending of the story; but the story is really long.

Comments

• I do not really like the story, because I have to make many cliks in the monitor to know the rest of the story. I also have to think and guess what happen next. I think I prefer to read the story which has easy to understand, but still can entertain the reader.
• I learned some vocabulary from science world. Yet, some of them difficult to understand. Sometimes I asked my friend in the middle of the activity to know the meaning the difficult words.

Rizqi A